The Horror Files

Black DeNiro said:
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What movie or thow is this from?
 
I'm tempted to narrate this story! Thumbs up if you want me to give it a go!

Tamstrong said:
"There was a hunter in the woods, who, after a long day hunting, was in the middle of an immense forest. It was getting dark, and having lost his bearings, he decided to head in one direction until he was clear of the increasingly oppressive foliage. After a what seemed like hours, he came across a cabin in a small clearing. Realizing how dark it had grown, he decided to see if he could stay there for the night. He approached, and found the door ajar. Nobody was inside. The hunter flopped down on the single bed, deciding to explain himself to the owner in the morning. As he looked around, he was suprised to see the walls adorned by many portraits, all painted in incredible detail. Without exception, they appeared to be staring down at him, their features twisted into looks of hatred. Staring back, he grew increasingly uncomfortable. Making a concerted effort to ignore the many hateful faces, he turned to face the wall, and exhausted, he fell into a restless sleep.

Face down in an unfamiliar bed, he turned blinking in unexpected sunlight. Looking up, he discovered that the cabin had no portraits, only windows."

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Morning Star said:
This is the audio narration of the story you posted, Tam. See if this makes your body tingle in fear or creepiness...

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Not a bad start; just needs a bit of tightening up. Something that I think would make it better would be doing in a more muted tone...like a telling ghost stories around the campfire kind of thing. Also, be careful of your diction...there was a bit of southernness coming out here & there (gettin', clearin', realizin'). Keep playing around with it, and keep an eye out for more stories that inspire you so you can really get into them. :smt023
 
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