The Horror Files

DonnyJ · Feb 10, 2014

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What movie or thow is this from?

Morning Star · Feb 10, 2014

I'm tempted to narrate this story! Thumbs up if you want me to give it a go!

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"There was a hunter in the woods, who, after a long day hunting, was in the middle of an immense forest. It was getting dark, and having lost his bearings, he decided to head in one direction until he was clear of the increasingly oppressive foliage. After a what seemed like hours, he came across a cabin in a small clearing. Realizing how dark it had grown, he decided to see if he could stay there for the night. He approached, and found the door ajar. Nobody was inside. The hunter flopped down on the single bed, deciding to explain himself to the owner in the morning. As he looked around, he was suprised to see the walls adorned by many portraits, all painted in incredible detail. Without exception, they appeared to be staring down at him, their features twisted into looks of hatred. Staring back, he grew increasingly uncomfortable. Making a concerted effort to ignore the many hateful faces, he turned to face the wall, and exhausted, he fell into a restless sleep.

Face down in an unfamiliar bed, he turned blinking in unexpected sunlight. Looking up, he discovered that the cabin had no portraits, only windows."

-Unknown
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Tamstrong · Feb 10, 2014

Morning Star said: ↑

I'm tempted to narrate this story! Thumbs up if you want me to give it a go!
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:smt023

Tamstrong · Feb 10, 2014

Black DeNiro said: ↑

Lol How lucky was he to be able to wake up the next morning? This story could have easily ended up being the hunter being the hunted.
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Good stuff, BD! :smt023

I like the way it ended. It was much creepier that he didn't end up the hunted one.

Black DeNiro · Feb 10, 2014

DonnyJ said: ↑

What movie or thow is this from?
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DAYWALT HORROR: Bedfellows

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Black DeNiro · Feb 10, 2014

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Good stuff, BD! :smt023

I like the way it ended. It was much creepier that he didn't end up the hunted one.
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True!! I'm sure he'll be having nightmares for awhile because of that cabin. I know I would.

Morning Star · Feb 10, 2014

Narrated Story

This is the audio narration of the story you posted, Tam. See if this makes your body tingle in fear or creepiness...

The Portraits

Archman · Feb 10, 2014

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DonnyJ · Feb 10, 2014

Black DeNiro said: ↑

DAYWALT HORROR: Bedfellows

[YOUTUBE]j6flB0XvmTo[/YOUTUBE]
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Thanks. That scared the hell outta me. You guys keep posting good stuff. :twisted:

Archman · Feb 10, 2014

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Tamstrong · Feb 20, 2014

Morning Star said: ↑

This is the audio narration of the story you posted, Tam. See if this makes your body tingle in fear or creepiness...

The Portraits
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Not a bad start; just needs a bit of tightening up. Something that I think would make it better would be doing in a more muted tone...like a telling ghost stories around the campfire kind of thing. Also, be careful of your diction...there was a bit of southernness coming out here & there (gettin', clearin', realizin'). Keep playing around with it, and keep an eye out for more stories that inspire you so you can really get into them. :smt023