Poetry Appreciation (do NOT post your own poetry)

Discussion in 'In the Media' started by Tamstrong, Feb 5, 2011.

  1. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    Not In Vain


    If I can stop one heart from breaking,
    I shall not live in vain:
    If I can ease one life the aching,
    Or cool one pain,
    Or help one fainting robin
    Unto his nest again,
    I shall not live in vain.

    -Emily Dickenson​
     
  2. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    I Refuse to be Discouraged

    I refuse to be discouraged,
    To be sad, or to cry;
    I refuse to be downhearted,
    and here's the reason why:

    I have a God who's mighty,
    Who's sovereign and supreme;
    I have a God who loves me,
    and I am on His team.

    He is all-wise and powerful.
    God is His name;
    Though everything is changeable,
    My God remains the same.

    My God knows all that's happening;
    Beginning to the end;
    His presence is my comfort;
    He is my dearest Friend.

    When sickness comes to weaken me,
    To bring my head down low,
    I call upon my mighty God;
    Into His arms I go.

    When circumstances threaten
    to rob me of my peace;
    He draws me close unto His breast,
    Where all my striving cease.

    When my heart melts within me,
    and weakness takes control;
    He gathers me into His arms,
    He soothes my heart and soul.

    The great "I AM" is with me.
    My life is in His hand;
    The "Son of the Lord" is my hope,
    It's in His strength I stand.

    I refuse to be defeated,
    My eyes are on my God;
    He has promised to be with me,
    as through this life I trod.

    I'm looking past all my circumstances,
    To Heaven's throne above;
    My prayers have reached the heart of God
    I'm resting in His love.

    I give God thanks in everything.
    My eyes are on His face;
    The battle's His, the victory mine;
    He'll help me win the race.

    -Shero Shayari
     
  3. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    23 Ways
    Written by Omari Hardwick

    It's 23 minutes past pain
    23 minutes ago
    23 faces that looked like these 23 got beaten again.
    The alarm clock just rang
    Every morning the time be the same.
    Another meeting with a school board in 22 minutes
    My rhyme be the same.
    New school, but same fool
    Bullies classmate with a board
    Cuz the bully decided the classmate was a tool...
    Dear Lord, this poet left mourning in the morning
    Rain pouring
    Inside my soul,
    Even though the sun is out...
    My smile got storms inside its hole
    Every time another son is left to shout...
    "Leave me alone...I'm just trying to get home!"
    Even though you see no tears
    I'm crying through this poem...
    Dear America, 21 students started the year
    With the other 23, and now the 21st is gone
    And she was my dear friend
    She got jumped by girls she thought were hers,
    Said she got fat...only liked her when she was thin
    Alarm ringing... hear it again...
    Wake up it's 2010
    23 days from the shake up!
    2011 and two thousand and eleven 7th & 8th graders will break up
    Before two thousand and eleven high school sweethearts will make up
    Nine hundred and eleven will take up
    With darkness in their view
    Like 911 planes - the crash is bigger than we ever knew...
    20 beautiful future Barack Obama's
    Are 20 miles from here considering sayin' goodbye to their single mamas
    Because they can't be with the beautiful girl they want to.
    Dear parents we at ground zero
    At 19; Was at college, bullied by my football teammate
    Cuz he said he could tell I'd one day be Fahrenheits' Ronnie Brown hero
    & I often wonder where he is & what he does...
    He's probably the father of someone your age
    Getting beaten up for being as smart as he was,
    Sitting in some assembly like you
    Listening to someone like me
    Say his daddy's prediction of me was true.
    Dear Lord, help me to see
    That those who claim to hate me
    Really actually love me
    And want to be like me too
    Or at least 18 of them do.
    Like my shadow...
    Like my twin tower...
    Children will lead our revolution
    But men will determine their power
    Dear fathers, it's 17 minutes past the hour
    Omari Hardwick - 23 Ways poem
    And we still rhythmless and dead beat
    So our son's and daughters showing up dead and beat
    Never had your hand to apply the heat
    So when the bully makes it too hot in the kitchen,
    Our sons retreat
    Never had a man to ask why or teach
    So when the bully is on his mission
    Our children's self esteem is shot
    And left bleeding in the streets...
    Call 911 now!
    Another confidence that coulda been more is down on the floor
    & Dear Mothers, the Ref is on the 9 count lookin for you to call the fight.
    Sure there's cooking to do but our daughters' losing their appetite.
    So this poem...perhaps a piece of food for thought...if I mite
    Cuz every 16 minutes 16 of our students are surrounded by 16 dark souls
    Do the math...thas 32 that need some light
    Our seeds are scared
    Our creed of love another as you would yourself is SMEARED
    Like Jesus bullied by 15 soldiers who cheered
    While they spit on his face,
    14 bullied Gandhi for running the same kind of RACE
    Like 13 spraying Dr. King with water hoses cuz of his RACE.
    This day is a Challenge I pose
    I suppose...Of sorts
    That we as leaders lead this fight against our children battering each other for sport
    Instead of participating in real sport
    We forced to watch Bryant Gumbel reports on Real Sports
    Bout some high school ball players who beat their 12-year-old teammate cuz he's gay,
    Leaving his 11-year-old back up who's confused about who he is, just as scared to play.
    Dear Words, sometimes I don't know which ones of you to say.
    I just know the underage hatred has to be driven away
    23 students in 23 states are no longer livin today...
    Thas an entire 7th grade class
    (drunkenly pushed off the chip on some classmate's shoulder who didn't like their looks
    Who didn't like that they were into their books.)
    The next Holden can yield...10 minutes is all it took
    To become the 9th wonder of his home room caught in the Rhye...
    And back at his home there's no room for his fears
    And his bad dreams to get by
    So he stuffs the pain he's dying to get out
    Deep into the crevices of the broken down couch
    Sat on daily by his 8-year-old sister Haley
    Who was seven the 1st time she was hit in the chin
    Cuz like Eminem she not the same color as an M&M
    So a misguided princess picked up five rocks
    And began to stone little Haley with them.
    Forrest Gump said it best
    But what is life when chocolate kids live in a box
    Where the school uniform should be bullet proof vests???
    Four Elton Johns will be bullied in the next 3 minutes of this poem being read
    Cuz they don't fit what the bullies parents once said.
    Dear Hope, what are we teaching our kids
    When there’s 2 left on this earth
    And even then 1 named Derrion Albert is "pummeled" by the other
    On a Chicago sidewalk until he’s pronounced DEAD...?
    And answers go unspoken because we're plagued by a deaf world
    So silence has spread...
    So today we pledge
    To save our boys and girls
    With Ronnie Brown's 23 Ways to Stop Youth Violence instead.
     
  4. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    Untitled

    it's valentine and i'm clementine alone in shreveport
    my poem is my retort
    pilgrimaging my way through the door
    scratching the paint and sniffing the perfume just once more
    wondering....
    the woman's hand on the other side of the knob
    and if her fingers match the clasp of mine
    anticipating the mutual throb-the pulse of potential passion
    wondering if i should give her my all in small rations
    holding the door like simon holding jesus
    i lay crucified at the thought of giving my family tree a new limb
    suspended in time
    defended by my rhymes
    i wanna get out of the bathroom line and skip to the front
    i wanna move inside and skip to what i want.....
    ....to find permanent residency in a woman's mind and live as the victim to her crime
    one she becomes guilty of committing everytime i'm home
    they say "when in rome.."
    i say .... when in poem....anything's possible.

    -Omari Hardwick

    Untitled

    The clouds look like perfectly nestled kids
    sprawled across a floor ALL in white fluffy sleeping bags
    @ a sleepover with full disco ball strobe lite moon
    hanging them with a rainbow haloing it.
    And as i stared in awe,
    i thot..mmm...they must be kids in a nice area
    cuz if that were the hood..
    the clouds woulda' been all over the damn place
    with holes all in the sleeping bags!
    They wouldn't be all lined up so perfect and shit.
    And the sleeping bags definitely would not have been all white,
    and they wouldn't have had so much fluff if any
    and they woulda' had holes all in em.
    There wouldn't be no halo!
    The moon woulda' jus been rockin a wave cap.
    I stared thinking..
    man demographics are so different in our world...
    even in the sky at night..
    on a midnite ride home from work...
    3,000 miles away from the sky above my family.

    Untitled

    I lament the green eyes of a queen never before seen..
    yet i saw 1000 times..
    maybe only God hears my dream..
    i'm awake now to finish her scene.
    &...action.
    I know ur daughter named after me (amari)
    and my son (chance) are playing up there..
    staying up way past their bedtime

    -Omari Hardwick


    Untitled

    I'm runnin outta time. I'm runnin outta space.
    Feel like I'm runnin round but i'm runnin in place.
    We all in a race. I'm just another sprinter.
    If there go the finish line, then who's the real winner?

    -Omari Hardwick
     
  5. Mighty Quinn

    Mighty Quinn New Member

    Silhouette

    Southern gentle lady,
    Do not swoon.
    They've just hung a black man
    In the dark of the moon.

    They've hung a black man
    To the roadside tree
    In the dark of the moon
    For the world to see
    How Dixie protects
    Its white womanhood.

    Southern gentle lady,
    Be good!
    Be good!

    - Langston Hughes
     
  6. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    Restless Night
    by Carole Mathys


    Colors drained from the day first

    then blackness ate from the edges

    to the enter

    shutting down my vision

    but not my thoughts



    Restlessly tossing

    letting my mind pull me

    into the surreal

    then wandering lost

    through slippery landscapes

    made entirely of illusions



    The sun began pushing

    the night from the sky

    and my thoughts kept chasing around

    in smaller and smaller circles

    seeking answers

    that fit like a faithful

    denim shadow



    Hearing from the wind

    ghostly exhalations

    shadows escaping

    and blending into dawn

    Answers appear and vanish

    only to reappear

    covering the illusions

    believed to be truths

    with clarity​
     
  7. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    A Song Unheard

    by Sarat sonowal

    Sued with vengeance in eyes
    beaten with every beat being played
    seen and ignored
    heard and unheard was his voice
    a boy with a smile
    was disposed off with disgust
    languishing and strugglin to stay afloat
    he sings a song so silent
    every ear heard his voice
    but unheard was his song
    he died of singing for his life
    to survive
    was such his song​
     
  8. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    Silent Goodbyes

    by Kristian Bisig

    Silent goodbyes,
    You were silent the whole time
    Except when you felt the need...
    To torture my soul.

    I don't regret...
    That's a mystery.
    I don't regret,
    For reasons known
    But...
    This hell is agony.

    A tortured soul
    Is disturbed forever,
    Engraved with scars
    Along with lonely stars.

    Darkness has captured you
    And it's where I lie
    Waiting to be executed.

    Death awaits
    But you hold me back
    With your dark grasp,
    In an angry hole.

    A tortured soul is lost forever,
    And I cry inside
    Fighting the pain.

    Silent goodbyes,
    You were silent the whole time!
    Except when you feel the need...
    Your sick, twisted, dark pleasure,
    To torture my soul.​
     
  9. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    I Love Thee by Eliza Acton

    "I love thee as I love the first
    Young violet of the spring;
    Or the pale lily, April-nurs'd,
    To scented blossoming.
    I love thee, as I love the full,
    Clear gushings of the song,
    Which lonely--sad--and beautiful--
    At night-fall floats along,
    Pour'd by the bul-bul forth to greet
    The hours of rest and dew;
    When melody and moonlight meet
    To blend their charm, and hue.
    I love thee, as the glad bird loves
    The freedom of its wing,
    On which delightedly it moves
    In wildest wandering." ​
     
  10. Tamstrong

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  11. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    Insomnia 2
    by C. Nichols


    Sometimes my thoughts are too loud

    I cannot sleep so I lay awake staring upwards

    With too much to reflect on

    But never the perfect words to seep

    Out onto the pages the clutter that collects

    Here in my messy head

    That yearns for peaceful silence

    In broad warm lands of my bed
     
  12. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    Insomnia
    by Kristie Smith

    Darkness, the blackness of a starless night
    Surrounds me as I long for you, wait for you
    To come upon me quietly and overtake me entirely
    Lying here in this dead limp colorless flesh
    Only my eyes darting back and forth occasionally
    Taking in the view of the night
    Each night I pray for you to come swiftly to me
    But you continue to evade me, ignore me, betray me
    And I wonder at moments like this
    Will I ever sleep again?
     
  13. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    Sleepless
    by Kristie Smith

    Stalking the night,
    Has become my day
    No more can I sleep
    It’s not supposed to be this way
    Awake for days, without a dream
    Unfortunately, they become mixed with reality
    Not knowing anymore, what is real or not
    My brain feels like a tornado
    It just won’t stop
    Hopping from here, to there, back again
    When will this mania come to its end?
    Begging God for so long, praying for sleep, bruised knees
    You don’t know about me
    Not the way you think you do
    Thinking my life is all sunshine and happiness
    Oh no, it is a waking nightmare of which I seem to never be released
    Praying for something better once I am deceased
     
  14. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    Unwanted
    by Kristie Smith

    I’m feeling it again
    Dreaded, oh, how I do dread thee
    Without warning you come
    Showing up at my door, the unwanted guest that you are
    Hiding from you in my pajamas, the covers pulled up to my eyeballs
    Hoping, praying you won’t find me
    It is inevitable, happens every time
    I resist the pressure you lay upon my fragile shoulders
    But they are not strong enough to withstand your force,
    I am not strong enough

    Over the years, you have worn down my strength
    Like the water passing over a smoothed out river rock
    Just when I think, things are going well
    You're back in my face again
    Your grim mask ready to take possession
    Why do you always beat me?
    Miserable depression…
     
  15. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    Alone
    by Kristie Smith

    Chaos has invaded my mind
    I cannot think straight and my life is jumbled
    Where is peace
    Will there ever be happiness for me
    Anything worth living
    I am tired of being all alone
    Wondering if I will ever be loved

    I sit by myself and contemplate
    And I am dissatisfied with my life
    Things won’t change or seem like they can’t
    I just want to feel better than this

    Better than always wanting to die
    Wishing for a release or a good hard cry
    Nothing but numbness has invaded me
    I cut through my skin and watch myself bleed

    Wow! I am a real person as the blood pools on the floor
    I sit on the floor with my back against the door
    Wish I could feel anything something at all
    Life keeps pressing in on my skull

    When will this pain ever recede?
    When will happiness become part of me?
    Why do I always do these same things?
    No one and nothing to blame but me
     
  16. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    Survivor


    I feel your eyes upon me,
    Searching for something, you will not find.
    I feel violated as you slip into my fragile mind.

    Violating my body wasn’t good enough for you,
    You worked your way inside my head to cause mental trauma too,

    The cuts and bruises will slowly heal,
    You abused my mind with your forceful will.
    My crystal brain has cracked,
    Just like my porcelain body, you beat blue and black.

    Torturing my spirit over and over with,
    Lashings I withstood until I no longer feared them,
    Growing dependent upon your inflicted pain,
    Makes me sick in my mind thinking of all the misery again.

    Evil wears a mask it is said,
    Behind the mask was every pretend kind thing you ever did,

    As I lay on the cotton, soft as your packed punch,
    I heal on the outside, but re-live the mental abuse,
    Like a child who doesn’t understand it’s not their fault.

    Striving to damage me was the main point in your wicked plot.
    Even though you are transparent, I see you in my dreams,
    Scaring my entire family at night when I wake up in sweaty screams.

    A survivor is what I am,
    Though you hurt me,
    I will never be a victim again.
     
  17. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    No Requirement


    My love
    does not
    require
    you to change.
    It simply
    invites you
    to come
    as you are.

    -Susie Clevenger


    My Heart Crashed Against the Stars

    My heart crashed
    against the stars
    when you
    looked into
    my eyes
    and saw the
    poetry written there

    I am all smile and humor
    to a world that doesn’t
    care to look inside,
    but you saw past my façade
    into the sonnet I had
    written with my tears.

    Love had once come
    whispering a promise
    to leave telling a lie.
    My heart became a recluse
    penning lines of sorrow.

    Can I trust the hope
    that wants to erase
    yesterday’s anguish?
    You stand there
    reading my verses
    with your eyes asking
    me to let you inside.

    I am not made of stone
    but of passion.
    I want to love again.
    I feel your heart wanting mine.
    Tiny steps is all I can take,
    I will take my first with you.

    -Susie Clevenger


    Melancholy's Sea

    imagination breathes
    moonlight into a poem
    to resuscitate the spirit
    pulled from melancholy’s sea

    -Susie Clevenger


    My Grief Sleeps With Me

    My grief sleeps with me,
    rustling the sheets to keep me awake.
    There is no formula to say
    when sorrow should not consume.

    Tears are the sheep I count.
    I toss and turn in my memories,
    my hand reaching to touch your face
    only to feel air dancing on my fingertips.

    If tomorrow I will hurt less,
    then please end this night.
    Even the moon outside my window
    has hidden its face from me.

    -Susie Clevenger​
     
  18. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    Sing Soul

    Sing soul
    My spirit
    Has lost
    Its melody
    My words
    Are quiet
    There is
    No music
    My muted
    Heart
    Sits silent
    In my chest
    Sing soul
    That my
    Poetry
    Will dance
    Again

    -Susie Clevenger​
     
  19. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    Chemistry 101

    In a room stripped clean of furnishings
    And the two of us stripped clean
    Of clothes and caution
    Pour cool drinks and mix in good music
    Then like Gerbils in a wheel
    Let us power the world
    With the lemon sharp electricity
    Crackling in the heavy air -
    Sparking between us like
    Fireflies in flight.

    A single kiss and I’ll fall into you
    My head dizzy with desire
    In this solitary room built for two
    Blood surges through our veins,
    Throbbing in a shared rhythm.
    Your eyes that paralyze
    Set my heavenly body in motion.
    In an instant, like the flip of a switch
    The hunger ignites us
    And then reunites us
    Once again in its fiery dance.

    A searching glance recalls this memory
    Of your lingering touch not yet felt,
    So lightly landed, with shivers afire
    Exploding and exploring the raw voltage of our dance.
    And, we have danced this volcanic tango
    Many times before, haven’t we, love?
    Yet time after time, all is newly familiar.

    Cool air on our skin and the sweat of
    Cool cocktails on our palms
    Cooling our fingers and cooling our tongues
    Cool music floating through the air,
    Adding melodic punctuation to our freefall ballet.

    In this world with electricity enough
    For the many worlds beyond us
    There are no glaciers near or large enough
    To quench or quell the intensity of this inferno.
    Face it my pet, there is just simply no way
    To cool the heat
    That lives in this world
    Between us.

    -Bobbi Baker
     
  20. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    Death, I think, is really life,
    The living, I'd call dead;
    To leave this human, mortal strife
    And in new paths be led.
    Death, I think, is beautiful,
    A new and happy home,
    To live then with the Father
    And away you'll never roam.
    Death, I know, brings sorrow,
    And often drops a tear;
    Then you think your end has come,
    But it's only life that's near.
    ----by Ted Hagstrom age 10,

    He was killed at age 13 in an auto accident.
     

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